Religion is one of those things that inevitably bring
about discord and argument- throughout history, but especially today. This is
especially ironic considering that religion was created by us as a means to
grapple with unanswerable questions and as a tool for us to connect and speak
with something much greater than ourselves. The role of religion in human life has
changed over time and seems now more than ever to be fading, seemingly on
attack by science and logic. Religion
for many people is still something they hold dearly to, for comfort, for
answers, and for a deeper spirituality. Karen Armstrong, in her essay “Homo Religiosus” argues in favor of
religion, acknowledging that its primary use is not one as a definitive answer
guide, but rather as a tool that enabled individuals to live with that which
they did not understand and perhaps even connect with the higher powers which
explained those phenomenons. Even though religion has evolved into something
that seems excess in pomp and pageantry and sometimes even resembles the
governments which we have become so disenfranchised by, they central goal of
religion remains the same as it was for our ancestors drawing fantastic beasts
in caves only to the light of the torch. Religion for many is so intertwined
with their day to day activity that spirituality for them is less an pursuit active
than it is passive state of being. Research shows how an active pursuit of fulfillment
and happiness is ill-fated, rarely leading to the satisfaction that individuals
so desire. A belief in religion, I believe, allows individuals to achieve
a happiness and fulfillment that is simply unattainable by “earthly means”.
The topic is very well framed and extremely engaging for the reader. To make the paper seem more like a scholarly debate you should start with adding in some other major sources, perhaps a counter argument to Armstrong's. Define an active pursuit of fulfillment and happiness because that is quite an ambiguous concept. Otherwise it's pretty good, its clear and concise which is perfect for an introduction.
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